Thursday, January 28, 2010
|Day 89 and 90 -- If you only knew....|
Day 89 was school then went home. Nothing AT ALL! Really...
Day 90: Had school, ate with Amanda, Debbie and Jared. Walked with them and Hwee Jun to Compass Point. Tiring! Ate at Mos Burger, chattered and played a very stupid game of "I Spy" Met Alwin, Jacki (or is it Jacky?) And Zann there too. Also saw Kenneth and the others there. After that went cold storage, then went home. At home I wrote something. Tell me what you think of it!
IF YOU ONLY KNEW Idea for a video :D
(Only the song is heard. Nothing else)
(Words in italic are lyrics, words in bold is the scene)
(Song is over here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tV8WhNnF_Sw)
0:00 – 0:17
Intro
Screens of a teenage boy is seen on a roof of a building, flipping through different views and a lily near the edge. The boy is standing at the edge and near the end of the intro he jumps off the building
0:17 – 0:25
If you only knew
I'm hanging by a thread
The web I spin for you
The boy is seen in a park near a pond and he’s studying under a tree
0:25 – 0:36
If you only knew
I'd sacrifice my beating heart
Before I lose you
A girl comes and joins him, they both start studying.
0:36 – 0:47
I still hold onto the letters
You returned
I swear I've lived and learned
The camera closes up to their faces as they start laughing over stuff.
0:47 – 0:57
It's 4:03 and I can't sleep
Without you next to me I
Toss and turn like the sea
The scene switches to a classroom where the boy and girl are seen.
0:57 – 1:16
If I drown tonight, bring me
Back to life
Breathe your breath in me
The only thing that I still believe
In is you, if you only knew
The girl receives a note that says “Will you be my girlfriend?” She smiles and looks at the boy, he smiles back
1:16 – 1:24
Bridge
The words ‘2 months later’ fade in and then fade out
1:24 – 1:33
If you only knew
How many times I counted
All the words that went wrong
The boy and girl are seen in a restraint dining alone and chatting and eating.
1:33 – 1:43
If you only knew
How I refuse to let you go,
Even when you're gone
They are seen walking alone the night street. They are happy and chatting gleefully.
1:43 – 1:54
I don't regret any days I
Spent, nights we shared,
Or letters that I sent
Scene changes to them very close to each other as the boy walks past a garden and picks a lily for the girl
1:54 – 2:26
It's 4:03 and I can't sleep
Without you next to me I
Toss and turn like the sea
If I drown tonight, bring me
Back to life
Breathe your breath in me
The only thing that I still believe
In is you, if you only knew
If you only knew
They are playing in a theme park as they take rides together and buying and eating stuff together. The girl takes a lot of photos of both of them together
2:26 – 2:45
Solo
The boy and girl are seen chasing around the park that they studied in. When they stop, the walk towards the pond that they were studying near to at the start.
2:45 – 2:55
I still hold onto the letters
You returned
You help me live and learn
The boy looks into the water and sees his reflection. The girl comes alongside and joins him.
2:55 – 3:03
It's 4:03 and I can't sleep
Without you next to me I…
The reflection changes into one at night, the girls reflection is gone and only the boy’s reflection remains.
3:03 – 3:06
…Toss and turn like the sea
A leaf falls onto the reflection as he stands up and sees the girl’s lifeless body (hands on her heart), in a coffin, being pushed into the pond that leads to the ocean.
3:06 – 3:18
If I drown tonight, bring me
Back to life
Breathe your breath in me
The only thing that I still believe
He places a lily in her hands and pushes the body away.
3:18 – 3:24
In is you, believe in is you
A pastor is seen reciting something as he looks on, face emotionless.
3:24 – 3:29
I still believe in you
Scene changes back to the rooftop as he places a lily and underneath it a picture. He climbs on the edge of the rooftop.
3:29 – 3:34
Oh oo oh Oh Oh
He jumps as the camera slowly down but at 3:34 it suddenly speeds up.
3:34 – 3:46
Oh, if you only knew
The camera zooms back to the picture and the lily with the words “I’m coming” scribbled on the picture.
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